I reread the story that I posted this past weekend and I didn't even understand it. I got lost trying to keep clear on exactly what was happening especially at the very end. It was a story I started years ago and left unfinished but now it's back in the shop for more work . I guess my main thought is that I discovered a new appreciation for writers in working on this little story. It's hard.
Maybe The Mysterious Mr. H will be back, maybe not. I need some help in correcting it. SAMANTHA if you're listening...........help